| Version Element | What I Thought It Was Doing | What It Was Actually Doing | Effect on Grade |
| Introduction | Setting context | Overloading background | Diluted focus |
| Body Paragraph 2 | Expanding argument | Repeating Paragraph 1 idea | Redundancy loss |
| Evidence Section | Strengthening claim | Listing sources without synthesis | Weak analysis |
| Conclusion | Summarizing insight | Introducing new idea late | Structural inconsistency |